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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : a thousand times


power on
23-03-2010, 04:31 PM
a thousand times

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without your warmth
without your smile
without you by my side
the world was so cold
I felt so lost
without your light
I felt so blind
a thousand milles
I'd run and walk
a thousand times
I'd slip and fall
but for you I'd do it again
a thousand times
you gave me hope
you let me dream
made me believe
I can still trust
you raised me up
you gave me wings
just like a kite in the sky
a thousand milles
I'd run and walk
a thousand times
I'd slip and fall
but for you I'd do it again
a thousand times
now worlds are enough
to convey
all the things I want to say
I want even try
coz I know
deep down you feel
how much I care
now I hold
my head up high
I see my dreams coming true
peace be with you
my dearest friend
in my heart you will remain





please friends I need your sincere opinion
thanks

الخَليل
23-03-2010, 06:15 PM
I see my dreams coming true
peace be with you
my dearest friend
in my heart you will remain
إدا كان الكلام منقول فهو رائع ولو كان من بنات أفكارك فهي رائعة جدا
بارك الله فيك

mariam2009
24-03-2010, 03:57 PM
amazing poem coz have meaning and they touch keep going and i like these word all the things I want to say
I want even try
coz I know
deep down you feel

BOND
25-03-2010, 12:16 PM
The subject of a beautiful and wonderful power on

houda sedrata
25-03-2010, 05:59 PM
i really like ur styl
u got wonderful ideas

imene racha
25-03-2010, 06:11 PM
now worlds are enough
to convey
all the things I want to say
I want even try
coz I know
deep down you feel
how much I care
now I hold
my head up high
I see my dreams coming true
peace be with you
my dearest friend
in my heart you will remain

it is the part that i like it more......
it is realy beautiful & full of deep meaning
it contain a purpose & there is a combain between ideas
you do have a talent in writing.....keep working like that
god bless you...best wishes

power on
26-03-2010, 10:45 AM
thank u friends tooooooooooooooooooooooooo much
but sincerely this isn't my ideas