على حــافة رمشــي

[تراتيل المطر]

تستيقظ ذات يوم على وقعِ صوتٍ صارخٍ وضجيجٍ .. تحاول الهروب تود الرحيل..تجرب الفرار تلامس الأنين.. تحزن تبكي.. تتشاجر مع رمشٍ كان يعشق النوم بعيدا عن خرخشاتِ الطنين!

عـــــلى ذاك الرمــشِ بدأت قصتي .. وعلى جنح ظلامه العلوي كانت البداية , أبدع ذاك الضجيج في وضع تراسيم خيوطٍ لا متوازيةٍ استرجعتُ بها شكل رمشٍ مُنحنٍ جديد.. بدأ ووفق طريقةٍ خاصةٍ في نسج تعاليم النهــآآية !!

زُحـــــــآآمٌ.. طائرات حربية

زُكـــــــآآمٌ.. قذائف دخانية

انعدامُ بصرٍ.. قنابلٌ مسيلة لدموعٍ أبدية!!

ابتل الرمشُ وسط زحمة حنينٍ..اجتُثَ الرمش بين وجنتي أنينٍ!!

شكلتُ معه ثنائيا صامتا حد الهذيان الممزوجِ كما.. فنجان قهوة ممزوجٍ شربته عنوةً لانعدام الوصفةِ لغياب القرارِ.. لحضور القدرِ لانسداد سبيل الفرارِ.

جسرُ مودةٍ جمعني به.. شبهته بفسحة أملٍ وسط سماءٍ زرقاءٍ غابتِ الشمسُ عنها لتذيقها مُرًا.. كان مُرًا جميلا أذاقني طعم السكر.. جمع السماء بشمسٍ غائبة.. جمعني برمشٍ ميتٍ حيٍ أحاط بتراسيمِ عينٍ وسط زحمة صوتٍ صارخٍ و.. ضجيجٍ

!! !! !! !!



03/09/2010 // 05.04



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[يوسف جزائري]

وووووو رائعة دكتورتنا ريمي

انظر تلك المعاني والاحاسيس
كيف يحاكي الرمش المشاعر
وعلى حافة العين تجري قصة اللأحاسيس الرقيقة وهيجان العاطفة



تحياتي

[حمبراوي]

المعذرة ....
كنت هنا عندما وضعت هذه الخاطرة ولم انتبه لها ....
وأزعم أني مشرف على المنتدى الأدبي ..
فكيف اختفت الخاطرة ؟
بخ بخ .. أبو لبانة مشرف على القسم الأدبي ...
المعذرة مرة أخرى ..

[علي قوادري]

تلاقح السردي مع الوصفي بمادة اللغة المكهربة بالشعر يمد النص بذبذبات صادمة حد الدهشة وهذا المطلوب من الاثر الادبي.
تقديري.

[تراتيل المطر]

وووووو رائعة دكتورتنا ريمي

انظر تلك المعاني والاحاسيس
كيف يحاكي الرمش المشاعر
وعلى حافة العين تجري قصة اللأحاسيس الرقيقة وهيجان العاطفة



تحياتي


كانت عاطفة هوجاء ,, وعُوّض الطاء بالصاد في العاصفة لهول الحس و تكهرب الشعور

الرمش دليل حسي ومعنوي لحس يكمن داخل قلب الشعور

ابتل رمشي ذات يوم .. لتكون مشاعري وقتها سيلا فائضا من الدموع !


طاطا .. مرورك يغنيني

:)

[تراتيل المطر]

المعذرة ....
كنت هنا عندما وضعت هذه الخاطرة ولم انتبه لها ....
وأزعم أني مشرف على المنتدى الأدبي ..
فكيف اختفت الخاطرة ؟
بخ بخ .. أبو لبانة مشرف على القسم الأدبي ...
المعذرة مرة أخرى ..



ولمَ الاعتذار يا صديق

أو لا تعلم أن التأخر يحلو في بعض أحيان وبخاصة حينما يكون صاحب المرور ذو طبع في الرد بشجون !

اعتبر مرورك من خاصة أشيائي .. فلا تبخل علي بشيء يعنيني,

[تراتيل المطر]

تلاقح السردي مع الوصفي بمادة اللغة المكهربة بالشعر يمد النص بذبذبات صادمة حد الدهشة وهذا المطلوب من الاثر الادبي.
تقديري.


وها أنت تضعني وسط جو من الإعصار الممزوج بألوان متفاوتة من قوس جميل وسط نهار يفصله عن أخيه ليل بنجوم كثيرة مضيئة !


راقني ردك وبشدة ^_^

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