خاطرة..*مسافر*

[زمن الوصل]

:13:سرح خيالي بعيدا وارتقى:13:حتى لم اعد بين الوجود ابقى:13:
...الى بلد غير معلوم..سطر مسلكه..وهم براحلته..في امسية صافية..تحت شمس باسمة..يرافقه الافق..وحيدا يهمسه السكون..مسافر يسير على مهل..في رحاب الكون..وبخطى ثابتة..نحو درب مجهول..بعد كل هذا وذاك..جلس على كثبان الرمل واستلقى..متاملا غروب الشمس..حتى استسلم للنوم فجاءة..وما هي الا لحظات..حتى استفاق وقد اسدل الليل جناحيه..وءانسه البدر المنير..وحفته النجوم...
قام ليكمل رحلته..رغم سهر الجفون..يسير دون دليل..في غيابات الصحراء..ووسط عتمة الليل..الا ان بزغ الفجر من جديد..وقد ناله التعب الشديد..واذ به يلمح من على مرئ عيناه..قرية غير بعيدة..فهم مسرعا اتجاهها..لكن الاعياء ارداه ساقطا..على كثبان الرمال ممددا..ليحمله اخيرا اهل القرية..وانزلوه منزلا..مغما عليه مرهقا..وبعد حين استيقض ..امام فتى بجانبه..
...الفتى:ياغريب الديار من تكون..اجاب المسافر:انا مسافر بارض الله الواسعة..رد الفتى بحسن لباقة وادب:*حللت اهلا ونزلت سهلا*..انت بين اهل كرم وضيافة..المسافر:بوركت بني..لكن لست ارى كبار القرية وشيوخها..الفتى:بلى فهم منشغلون بجني الثمار والفلاحة..وقد كلفوني بتسيير شؤون القرية في غيابهم..المسافر:عجبا وحدك اوا تستطيع القيام بكل هذا بمفردك..الفتى:كما قلت لك استطيع فعل ذلك لانني تعلمت من الكبار كل شيء عند مجالستي لهم..وها قد اتى احد منهم..رحب الشيخ بالمسافر وحدثه قائلا:هذا فتى القرية ووريثها ..لانه اثبت جدارته بامتياز ..وله من الدهاء والحكمة ما يخوله تشريفنا وخلافتنا..ونحن نعول عليه حين غيابنا..ولا نحقر صغر سنه ابدا..المسافر:بالفعل فقد احسن استضافتي..وكان خلوقا مهذبا...
...استجمع المسافر قواه واعد زاده..وهم بالمضي في رحلة جديدة..مودعا افراد القرية ..شاكرا حسن استضافتهم له..واوصاهم بالفتى..هكذا وفي يوم جديد اخر..وفي رحلة ومغامرة اخرى...:13::15::13:
...:13:زكرياء فيلالي:13:...

[مشتاق لأخي]

لم أفهم معنى غيابات الصحراء ...

تتدرج من الحوار إلى المقامة ... إبداع جديد لم ألحظه من قبل

بارك الله فيك ....

[Karim Ibn Karim]

رااااااائع جدا اخي
مبدع و متالق
=========
مقدمة رائعة
تصلح لان تكون رواية طويلة
مثلما وعدتنا بانك قد عقدت العزم
==
اسلوب قصصي جيد
==
تستطيع ان تكتب اخي قصصا
او رواية طويلة
و انا متاكد من انك
ستنجح
=================
تحياتي

[زمن الوصل]

لم أفهم معنى غيابات الصحراء ...

تتدرج من الحوار إلى المقامة ... إبداع جديد لم ألحظه من قبل

بارك الله فيك ....
..سؤالك اخي بمحله ومعنى كلمة *غيابات*ورغم ورودها في القران الكريم في سورة نبي الله *يوسف عليه السلام*الى انه لم يرد لها معنى محدد لكن قيه ان الغيابات هي بمثل المتاهات وقد ورد قول في التفسير لابن كثير..لكنني بما اني رئيتها شاملة للتيه استخدمتها للدلالة..على معنى التيه في الصحراء والقصد واحد ..اما عن التدرج من الحوار الى المقامة ..لحد الان انت تعلم انني لست بمكانة تخولني الخوض بالمقامة لكن اسلوب الحوار اقرب الي..وتشكر اخي على التفاعل..:13::16::13:

[زمن الوصل]

رااااااائع جدا اخي
مبدع و متالق
=========
مقدمة رائعة
تصلح لان تكون رواية طويلة
مثلما وعدتنا بانك قد عقدت العزم
==
اسلوب قصصي جيد
==
تستطيع ان تكتب اخي قصصا
او رواية طويلة
و انا متاكد من انك
ستنجح
=================
تحياتي
...تشكر اخي على طيب التفاعل الرواية قد تكون اسلوب سهل لكن طويلة ليس بمقدوري ان اكتب رواية طويلة ..كما انني تلقيت هدية من استاذة الله العربية وهي رواية للكاتب الروائي الراحل*الطاهر وطار*بعنوان الحوات والقصر..كانت طويلة لكنني لا استطيع الكتابة مطولا..للاسف..لكن القصص القصيرة ربما...افكر بذلك..:13::5::13::16:
...تحياتي لك اخي...على تشجيعك وتحفيزاتك ...دمت بود..:15:

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