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londonhbb 04-06-2010 12:15 AM

Hate !!
 
The case is about one follows the other
The face can be seen through the mirror
How can a son born without his mother ?
and how can a fish live without its river?


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The Black is known beacuse of White
The peace is pleased because of fight
and the darkness is cursed beacuse of light
Blindness is badly treated beacuse of sight


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The hunter awakes early and never targets when late
Enemy is distinguished when having a real mate
Desperation is ended with opening of hope's gate
Love remained valuable thanks to Hate !!

mariam2009 04-06-2010 07:54 AM

رد: Hate !!
 
great poem thanks a lot

londonhbb 04-06-2010 11:23 AM

رد: Hate !!
 
thnx mary . It was just an attempt to try writing an English poem . Hope u really like it ?!!!

Manel17 04-06-2010 06:37 PM

رد: Hate !!
 
Hi
this is really cool,isn't it?

u will not taste the success if u don't loose

logic

thanx friend

ونكربي أحمدون 04-06-2010 06:39 PM

رد: Hate !!
 
hate why not love....is best

londonhbb 05-06-2010 01:02 AM

رد: Hate !!
 
thnx guys I appreciate ur comments

رشيد الماضوي 05-06-2010 09:56 AM

رد: Hate !!
 
your poem my brother is really great
full of wisdom , emotions and fate
people may love and sometimes hate
people's actions when they meet

MANEL 27 05-06-2010 11:35 AM

رد: Hate !!
 
Thanx a lot

امال 44 06-06-2010 03:27 PM

رد: Hate !!
 
that s great brother carry on attempting for sure you will succeed if Allah will

power on 09-06-2010 02:21 PM

رد: Hate !!
 
thanks sister for the poem

londonhbb 10-06-2010 09:28 PM

رد: Hate !!
 
power onI'm a male

rimè 24-06-2010 06:35 PM

رد: Hate !!
 
it is a top poem

Layan Algeria 24-06-2010 08:48 PM

رد: Hate !!
 
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The case is about one follows the other
The face can be seen through the mirror
How can a son born without his mother ?
and how can a fish live without its river?


********


The Black is known beacuse of White
The peace is pleased because of fight
and the darkness is cursed beacuse of light
Blindness is badly treated beacuse of sight


********


The hunter awakes early and never targets when late
Enemy is distinguished when having a real mate
Desperation is ended with opening of hope's gate
Love remained valuable thanks to Hate !!



The hunter awakes early and never targets when late
Enemy is distinguished when having a real mate
Desperation is ended with opening of hope's gate
Love remained valuable thanks to Hate

londonhbb 02-07-2010 11:12 PM

رد: Hate !!
 
ur comments push me to write more nd more . Wait 4 additional poems mates !

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