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أختُ عبد الرحمان 24-12-2008 03:17 PM

Just a Proposal
 
Salam Alaykoum Everyone

I have noticed that lots of our members enjoy writing in English which is very impressing. So I recommand a monthly competition called

Golden Writings

Where everymonth, those who are interested in writing in English put what they have wrote , it can be anything poems, stories or even a paragraph.

And then the members would vote for the best writing and the winner will recieve a badge to put in his /her signature.

So what do you think?

Kind Regards

DJ-rb10 26-12-2008 12:35 AM

رد: Just a Proposal
 
Asalamualikum Brothers n sisters
i would start with my 25 bars that i lately wrote,


Dear mama, i rote this note for you
to tell you that i anderstand every thing you said to me,
when i was a lil' kid i didn't know
how much you mean to me
you use to tell me what to do n what not to do,
but i was a fool didn't listen to ya,
you never tret me bad,
and i never ment to make you sad
i wish i new, every thing you told is true
now i realize that,
you're a wise woman tryna rais men
but i allways break the rules
runnin out from the schools
i thought that was cool
intill one day
you steped in my way
you just told me "that's wrong"
it takes too long to anderstand
i just wanna say thanks cuz you gave me all what i need
i've seen a lotta women leave them kids on the street
you allways make sure that eat even you didn't
you tought me how to write n how to read
you showed me the muslim creed
ar rasoul salla allhu alaihi wa salam (pbbuh) said:
heaven's under mother's feet
.

أختُ عبد الرحمان 26-12-2008 06:07 PM

رد: Just a Proposal
 
اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة DJ-rb10 (المشاركة 398546)
Asalamualikum Brothers n sisters


i would start with my 25 bars that i lately wrote,

Dear mama, i rote this note for you
to tell you that i anderstand every thing you said to me,
when i was a lil' kid i didn't know
how much you mean to me
you use to tell me what to do n what not to do,
but i was a fool didn't listen to ya,
you never tret me bad,
and i never ment to make you sad
i wish i new, every thing you told is true
now i realize that,
you're a wise woman tryna rais men
but i allways break the rules
runnin out from the schools
i thought that was cool
intill one day
you steped in my way
you just told me "that's wrong"
it takes too long to anderstand
i just wanna say thanks cuz you gave me all what i need
i've seen a lotta women leave them kids on the street
you allways make sure that eat even you didn't
you tought me how to write n how to read
you showed me the muslim creed
ar rasoul salla allhu alaihi wa salam (pbbuh) said:

heaven's under mother's feet
.

Very nice bro
May Allah Bless you and your mother
I think it looks more like a rap song ...LOL
I hope we read more of your bars later..so don't be selfish...share with us
Regards

DJ-rb10 26-12-2008 10:46 PM

رد: Just a Proposal
 
اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة مريم بنت الجزائر (المشاركة 399759)
Very nice bro
May Allah Bless you and your mother
I think it looks more like a rap song ...LOL
I hope we read more of your bars later..so don't be selfish...share with us
Regards

well... thanks..nosweat
and yeah,
ima RAP song Writer ( not a rapper )
also a baby Disc Joker
this what i do, now n forever
what can i say, it's outta control
it's in my soul,
when i start spittin words i cant stop
cuz um addicted to Hip Hop
ima crazy RAP Machine
like you've never seen
and My RAP's so clean
just like native deen...
you kno what i mean
all i need is one pen
ask around, who's the man
they tell you .. D J-R B Ten



peace up sis' ,take care

أختُ عبد الرحمان 27-12-2008 11:34 AM

رد: Just a Proposal
 
اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة DJ-rb10 (المشاركة 400328)
well... thanks..nosweat
and yeah,
ima RAP song Writer ( not a rapper )
also a baby Disc Joker
this what i do, now n forever
what can i say, it's outta control
it's in my soul,
when i start spittin words i cant stop
cuz um addicted to Hip Hop
ima crazy RAP Machine
like you've never seen
and My RAP's so clean
just like native deen...
you kno what i mean
all i need is one pen
ask around, who's the man
they tell you .. D J-R B Ten



peace up sis' ,take care

Oh...that's why
Your writing is so good..especially your use of rhymes
I think we should do an interview with you

SaLaM

الحسناء 27-12-2008 02:48 PM

رد: Just a Proposal
 
peace be upon u
it a good idea
me i don t write in englishno
but i will encourage those who will participate
waiting 4 ur stories ;poems....etc
thanx mimi
bye

emeraude 28-12-2008 09:02 PM

رد: Just a Proposal
 
Esalam Alaikom Mimi
I agree with you,clap it's a good idea, and it will encourage people to try to write and practice their english!
Go ahead....i'm with you...i love English and it will be very icon30interesting i'm sure!
Best whises!

أختُ عبد الرحمان 28-12-2008 09:07 PM

رد: Just a Proposal
 
Thank you very much for your comments

emeraude & Kawtar

Kawtar don't be silly honey..your English is Excellent
You should participate by putting at least one sentence.
http://montada.echoroukonline.com/im...ons/icon12.gif

Regards

emeraude 05-01-2009 09:36 PM

رد: learn some fun idioms with me every day
 
salam
Today i suggest to learn some English idioms fun in order to learn some new words and have fun in the same time!

there are series of idioms:
* Animal Idioms
*Food Idioms
* Body idioms
and i'll try to give you a new idiom every day.
please feel free to make any suggetion or advice

regards


BODY IDIOM - EYE

His eyes are bigger than his stomach.

In English, if someone takes too much food and then can't eat it all, we say “his eyes were bigger than his stomach

جـائـع



Ibndz 29-03-2009 08:25 PM

رد: Just a Proposal
 
we're waiting for you guys, I hope to see your golden works fulling this paper

فاروق نشاد 06-05-2009 04:42 PM

رد: Just a Proposal
 
peace be upon you .......truly..without any lies...it's very good idea which need some interesting and supporting from us......well firstible i'm with you...salamclap

Layan Algeria 10-05-2009 11:48 AM

رد: Just a Proposal
 
I agree ...... let's start

Every morning .... I get up..... it's 7.....

The first think that comes to my mind is your face , your smile, I wish I was there with you sharing my first second only with you ......

So hard to feel that you are living this life alone but inside our heart there is someone who lives with us ... a person that will never let us .... care about us ..... love us ... and think about us all the time.

Work , studies , any thing just doing whatever we should do to come back home

Going back again to the bed sleeping and wishing to get up next day hoping to see you even dreaming of you.....



Unfaithful 10-05-2009 04:57 PM

رد: Just a Proposal
 
Your presence is a gift to the world,
You're unique and one of a kind.
Your life can be what you want it to be -
Take it one day at a time.

Count your blessings, not your troubles,
And you'll make it through what comes along.
Within you are so many answers,
Understand, have courage, be strong.

Don't put limits on yourself,
Your dreams are waiting to be realized.
Don't leave your important decisions to chance -
Reach for your peak, your goal, and your prize.

Nothing wastes more energy than worrying -
The longer a problem is carried, the heavier it gets.
Don't take things too seriously -
Live a life of serenity, not a life of regrets.

Remember that a little love goes a long way -
Remember that a lot goes forever.
Remember that friendship is a wise investment,
Life's treasures are people... together.

Have health and hope and happiness cupidarrow,
Take the time to wish on a star.
And don't ever forget for even a day...
How very special YOU are

Redeem 10-05-2009 05:45 PM

Re: Just a Proposal
 
Assalam Alaikum. Here's my contribution

When things are down And you are out of your mind
Remember just remember Allah is The Kind.

When your life is in darkness And nothing is right
Remember just remember Through the darkness, Allah is The Light.

When nothing makes sense And your heading for demise
Remember just remember It doesn't make sense, but Allah is The Wise.

When times are troubled And no one seems to care
Remember just remember Allah won't hurt you, He is The Fair.

When your heart is breaking And your pain makes you fall
Remember just remember Allah Sees it all.

When you are weak And the road seems long
Remember just remember Seek strength from The Strong.

When life is a burden And everything is unstable
Remember just remember Allah is The Able.

When the way is cloudy And there is no one by your side
Remember just remember Allah is The Only Guide.

When no one wants to listen Or is willing to lend an ear
Remember just remember Allah is always ready to hear.

When you are poor and penniless And you are stuck in a niche
Remember just remember Allah is The Rich.

When you are down in your misery And there is nowhere to run
Remember just remember You can always run to The One.

When you’re all alone And your pain has no end
Remember just remember Allah is the one to mend.

And when your scars are hurting And your heart is in fear
Remember just remember Allah is really here.

Unknown,,

عفاف24 18-07-2009 07:57 PM

رد: Just a Proposal
 
clapicon30so.i'm.very.proud.of.you.really.when.i.r ead.your.words.i.felt.that.you.wrote.them.with.lov e.I.HOPE.all.the.best.for.u.zanaz

betabeta40 28-07-2009 01:08 PM

رد: Just a Proposal
 
Salamou-alaikoum
I think it would be better to write about ourselves and our culture not about the culture of others because we are not the others.

windbreaker 10-10-2009 10:15 AM

رد: Just a Proposal
 
Thanks for the initiative, will revert to you soon with some lines...wish you all a nice week end

رقية92 25-11-2009 12:58 PM

رد: Just a Proposal
 


I totally agree with you sister

Thanks for the brilliant idea


MedBelkhier 23-05-2010 06:05 PM

رد: Just a Proposal
 
مشكوووووووووووووووووووووووووووووووووووووور.

MedBelkhier 23-05-2010 06:06 PM

رد: Just a Proposal
 
واصل إبداعك.

MedBelkhier 23-05-2010 06:08 PM

رد: Just a Proposal
 
بارك الله فيك موفق بإذن الله

Abdelbasset Kab 23-05-2010 06:27 PM

رد: Just a Proposal
 
well i think that's the only one way to encourage english learning
thank you meriouma for giving me this chance to remember what i have almost forgetten

algeroi 05-08-2010 10:26 AM

رد: Just a Proposal
 
I'm afraid !!
maybe i'll be the worst one among you ,but even i can't write English very well, i'll be trying to give you my best, but you should promise me that you don't laugh whenever you will read my work.

دائمة الذكر 19-10-2010 08:21 AM

رد: Just a Proposal
 
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medas 29-05-2012 02:10 PM

رد: Just a Proposal
 
:9: ?Why isn't this thread active anymore

خواطر مكسورة 30-05-2012 12:01 PM

رد: Just a Proposal
 
Thank you for a wonderful idea and I wish success for all

Accept traffic from the humble heart

دنيا زائلة 14-08-2012 09:28 PM

رد: Just a Proposal
 
salam ; its a gorgeous idea 2 improve are language ...and its my favorite more than french4 sure i'll do my best to participate

أفراح الرّوح 24-12-2012 02:24 PM

رد: Just a Proposal
 
the idea is prfect honney
& like they said
i am here to vote
but to write some think
it s so hard
& my level at engl
sooo horrible

tears ):



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